2022年7月 TOEIC SW受験レポート（9回目）

＜改善ポイント＞
重複する表現を改善する。
・There isの代わりに I can see, ○○ is visible を使う。
・二人目の時は、another womanを使う。
・wearing→dressed inに変えてみる。

This is a picture taken inside.
There are three women in the picture.
In the middle, I can see a woman.
She is dressed in a blue shirt and looking at many clothes.
On the right side, another woman is visible.
She is wearing a gray blouse and trying on a gray hat.

＜改善ポイント＞
①Q3と同様、there is構文が多い
②どんな前置詞を使うかを注意。
・in the same direction…inが必要。
・speedの場合、atをつける。
③その他
・同じ方向を向いている：is facing in the same direction.
・haveは基本進行形で使えない→carrying, holdingを使う。
・seem likeの後は主語＋動詞可能。

This is a picture taken outside.
There are three people in the picture.
They all are walking in the same direction.
On the right side, I can see a man and a woman.
They are carrying a suitcase.
In the background, a black car is visible.
It seems like it’s going at high speed.

＜改善ポイント＞
具体的なタイトルとか言えるとよい。

I go to theaters twice a year.
I like to see horror movies.
For example, I love Friday the 13th.

＜改善ポイント＞
・修飾語句がないので、普段からお腹が空いているような印象を受けてしまう
・tend to be　を使う。

Yes, I usually buy food when watching movies.
This is because I’m often hungry while watching movies.
Movies tend to be long.

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・It to構文を使う。
・２つ目の理由を入れる（convenience）

I usually purchase movie tickets on the internet.
I have several reasons.

First of all, it’s very reasonable.
For example, it‘s much cheaper to buy tickets on the internet than in the theater.

Additionally, we have to consider the convenience of buying tickets on the internet.
In fact, if you go to the home page of movie theaters, you are more likely to get the seats you’d like.

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・be going toも使う。
・時間余ったら Do you have any other questions?

It will be held in room A-17.
It‘s going to start at 10:30 am.
Do you have any other questions?

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・時間余ったら Keep that in mind.

Actually, that is not correct.
The 3 pm. interview with Mr. Spector has been canceled.
Keep that in mind.

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There is構文は、固有名詞とのあまり相性が良くなく、基本的に、不定冠詞aとかan、初めましてのもので使う。
固有名詞を主語にした方がよい。

Sure, there are two applicants.
First, Mr. Spector is going to have an interview test at 10 am.
He desires to be in the legal department.
Additionally, Ms. Sorano will also have an interview test at 2 pm.
She hopes to be in the information system department.

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・２つ目の理由の利便性で、学習に集中することと、公共交通機関をフリーにすることが、繋がっていない。

In my opinion, public transportation should be free for students.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.

First of all, it is really convenient for students.
For example, if they don’t have to pay money for public transportation, they can go around the city and learn a lot of things by visiting places such as museums and theaters.

Additionally, their awareness of the environment and ecology will increase.
In fact, using public transportation leads to protecting the natural environment.
Making public transportation free contributes to protecting the natural environment.

That’s why I think it is a very important idea and strategy for students.

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・answerはtoでなく直接目的語

To whom it may concern,

Thank you for your e-mail.
I’m happy to answer the questions, and I have three things to tell you.

First of all, I’m into yoga lessons, but I’d love to have two lessons in a week.
Second, I’d like you to have lessons at night, especially until 10 p.m. because I work during the day.
Finally, I’d like to utilize treadmills because there is no place to run nearby.

Should you have any questions, please let me know anytime.

Best regards,

Eru

Dear Ms. Sorano,

Thank you very much for your e-mail.
I have two pieces of information and one question.

First of all, A Room is available.
Also, we need the number of people who are going to put up a room and your favorite time.
Finally, would you like to have meals from the hotel?

Should you have any questions, please let me know anytime.

Best regards,

Eru